Wednesday, 17 October 2012

script -Not finished


Act 1 Scene 1-

EXT – FRANCE ALLEY WAY – NIGHT

ALEXIA (15, personality is very a glamour look, loves wearing make-up and sparkly clothing, loves to stand out one of her favourite colour is pink) She is walking along the dark alley with her boyfriend (DAMION, 15 loves to look very handsome and seems very posh) they are both acting drunk because they just came out from a club.

                        ALEXIA- (calm voice)

         You know that girl you randomly kissed in the club?

                        DAMION- (drunken confused voice)

               What are you talking about Alexia?

                        ALEXIA- (angry tone)

Don’t act stupid with me DAMION I saw you kiss that girl… you cheated on me! (AlEXIA Slaps DAMION on the face really hard).

                       DAMION- (Angry tone)

How dare you hit me ALEXIA! Ok you wanna play that game... I can ‘play’ along (He pushes ALEXIA against the wall and punches her in the face.)

                       ALEXIA- (Shouting angry tone)

YOUR GOING TO REGRET THAT DAMION! (ALEXIA takes out a sharp pocket knife and slices DAMION arm.) Oh my… I am terribly sorry DAMION (ALEXIA runs away in fear).

Act 1 Scene 2-

INT- BEDROOM – DAY

ALEXIA (16, she has a completely new personality, her new favourite colour is pure black and she now thinks of self and a vampire, she does not wear the glamour look she used to wear.) She wakes up from the terrible nightmare after what had happened in her past in France, she had just recently moved to the UK around the estate of Bermondsey because of the ‘accident’ that happened in France, the police are looking for and the only way she could escape from them is to look completely different and to live somewhere far away.

                        ALEXIA-

(Rises from her coffin bed in fear) Oh gosh it was just a dream, a dream that I wish never happened in real life. (She gets up and puts on her video log) Hello it’s me ALEXIA and this video log is about my new lifestyle in Bermondsey after I just moved from… Australia (not wanting to reveal where she came from), so far it has a COMPLETE nightmare, the girls that call themselves ‘The Beauty Girls’ are ruining my life! But me I call them ‘The Chavs’ because they all act like one, especially these two main girls, one called CHLOE and the other one called LEXIE, they are complete drama queens always making sure they are looking the best and take any chance to ruin ANYONES life, BEWARE! They seem to have issues on how to act like a human being. I have been planning for a very long time on how I am going to bring down ‘The Chavs’ so they can learn not to even try to mess with me again.

                       EDWARD- (shouting)

ALEXIA stop talking to yourself and get up so you can go out of this house, also get your own breakfast your old enough to start looking after yourself since you made us move from FRANCE to this dump place without leaving an explanation. ALEXIA I am not a patient person, come down NOW!

                       ALEXIA- (whispers)

Sorry, that was my dad I gotta go before who knows what will happen (turns off video log). ALL RIGHT DAD IM COMING AND I ALREADY TOLD YOU IM NOT TALKING TO MYSELF IT’S MY VIDEO LOG!

                        EDWARD- (shouting)

I don’t care if it’s your ‘video log’ you’re talking to, stops making up excuses and leave this house this instant, and make sure your home on time otherwise there will be consequences!

                        ALEXIA- (shouting back)

(Quickly puts on clothes and ‘make-up’) yeah, yeah, dad whatever I’d rather leave now than stay with you!

 

 

 

Act 2- Scene 1-

EXT- PAVEMENT- DAY

ALEXIA (16, is wearing her new Goth look with a cigarette on her hand and drinking at the same time) she is walking along the pavement making sure nobody she knows see’s what she is doing. CHLOE (16 the lead of the group always making sure she stands out more than anybody else), LEXIE (16, was the lead until she became too nice that someone else had to take over.) and the rest of the group are walking the same direction as ALEXIA but they don’t know because of the way she looks until they saw her face…

                           CHLOE- (whispers to group)

OMG isn’t that the freaky new girl that goes to our school? No one answer that I’m sure it is, LEXIE take a picture of her with YOUR mobile phone you know just in case anything happens unless your style too nice.

                          LEXIE-

Okay CHLOE that was just a onetime thing, you really want to make a big deal out of it, and then carry on wasting your time. Any who (Takes out phone and takes a picture of ALEXIA).

                         CHLOE-

Watevs LEXIE (rolls eyes and takes LEXIE phone, and walks towards ALEXIA) Hey ALEXIA, that’s your name right? Anyways look at my new screensaver (shows ALEXIA the picture) beautiful right? Funny how EVERYONE in school is going to be talking about this in school tomorrow, this is just amazing.

                          LEXIE-

CHLOE you have serious issues on messing with other people, that picture is a fake, I’m sure you won’t even have the guts to send it around!

1 comment:

  1. Excellent work, you have used the appropriate format conventions of a script and added in extra details about how characters say their dialogue.

    Merit

    Target - your first act is a flashback which does not fit the conventions of a mockumentary. How could you change it so that the information is still communicated but so that it looks like a mockumentary. This about the narrator and the use of direct speech to camera/interview structure.

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