Act 1 Scene 1-
EXT – FRANCE ALLEY WAY – NIGHT
ALEXIA (15, personality is very a
glamour look, loves wearing make-up and sparkly clothing, loves to stand out
one of her favourite colour is pink) She is walking along the dark alley with
her boyfriend (DAMION, 15 loves to look very handsome and seems very posh) they
are both acting drunk because they just came out from a club.
ALEXIA- (calm voice)
You know that girl you randomly kissed
in the club?
DAMION- (drunken confused
voice)
What are you talking about
Alexia?
ALEXIA- (angry tone)
Don’t act stupid with me DAMION I
saw you kiss that girl… you cheated on me! (AlEXIA Slaps DAMION on the face
really hard).
DAMION- (Angry tone)
How dare you hit me ALEXIA! Ok you
wanna play that game... I can ‘play’ along (He pushes ALEXIA against the wall
and punches her in the face.)
ALEXIA- (Shouting angry tone)
YOUR GOING TO REGRET THAT DAMION!
(ALEXIA takes out a sharp pocket knife and slices DAMION arm.) Oh my… I am
terribly sorry DAMION (ALEXIA runs away in fear).
Act 1 Scene 2-
INT- BEDROOM – DAY
ALEXIA (16, she has a completely
new personality, her new favourite colour is pure black and she now thinks of
self and a vampire, she does not wear the glamour look she used to wear.) She
wakes up from the terrible nightmare after what had happened in her past in
France, she had just recently moved to the UK around the estate of Bermondsey because
of the ‘accident’ that happened in France, the police are looking for and the
only way she could escape from them is to look completely different and to live
somewhere far away.
ALEXIA-
(Rises from her coffin bed in fear)
Oh gosh it was just a dream, a dream that I wish never happened in real life.
(She gets up and puts on her video log) Hello it’s me ALEXIA and this video log
is about my new lifestyle in Bermondsey after I just moved from… Australia (not
wanting to reveal where she came from), so far it has a COMPLETE nightmare, the
girls that call themselves ‘The Beauty Girls’ are ruining my life! But me I
call them ‘The Chavs’ because they all act like one, especially these two main
girls, one called CHLOE and the other one called LEXIE, they are complete drama
queens always making sure they are looking the best and take any chance to ruin
ANYONES life, BEWARE! They seem to have issues on how to act like a human
being. I have been planning for a very long time on how I am going to bring
down ‘The Chavs’ so they can learn not to even try to mess with me again.
EDWARD- (shouting)
ALEXIA stop talking to yourself and
get up so you can go out of this house, also get your own breakfast your old
enough to start looking after yourself since you made us move from FRANCE to
this dump place without leaving an explanation. ALEXIA I am not a patient
person, come down NOW!
ALEXIA- (whispers)
Sorry, that was my dad I gotta go
before who knows what will happen (turns off video log). ALL RIGHT DAD IM
COMING AND I ALREADY TOLD YOU IM NOT TALKING TO MYSELF IT’S MY VIDEO LOG!
EDWARD- (shouting)
I don’t care if it’s your ‘video
log’ you’re talking to, stops making up excuses and leave this house this
instant, and make sure your home on time otherwise there will be consequences!
ALEXIA- (shouting back)
(Quickly puts on clothes and
‘make-up’) yeah, yeah, dad whatever I’d rather leave now than stay with you!
Act 2- Scene 1-
EXT- PAVEMENT- DAY
ALEXIA (16, is wearing her new Goth
look with a cigarette on her hand and drinking at the same time) she is walking
along the pavement making sure nobody she knows see’s what she is doing. CHLOE
(16 the lead of the group always making sure she stands out more than anybody
else), LEXIE (16, was the lead until she became too nice that someone else had
to take over.) and the rest of the group are walking the same direction as
ALEXIA but they don’t know because of the way she looks until they saw her
face…
CHLOE- (whispers to
group)
OMG isn’t that the freaky new girl
that goes to our school? No one answer that I’m sure it is, LEXIE take a
picture of her with YOUR mobile phone you know just in case anything happens
unless your style too nice.
LEXIE-
Okay CHLOE that was just a onetime
thing, you really want to make a big deal out of it, and then carry on wasting
your time. Any who (Takes out phone and takes a picture of ALEXIA).
CHLOE-
Watevs LEXIE (rolls eyes and takes
LEXIE phone, and walks towards ALEXIA) Hey ALEXIA, that’s your name right? Anyways
look at my new screensaver (shows ALEXIA the picture) beautiful right? Funny how
EVERYONE in school is going to be talking about this in school tomorrow, this
is just amazing.
LEXIE-
CHLOE you have serious issues on
messing with other people, that picture is a fake, I’m sure you won’t even have
the guts to send it around!
Excellent work, you have used the appropriate format conventions of a script and added in extra details about how characters say their dialogue.
ReplyDeleteMerit
Target - your first act is a flashback which does not fit the conventions of a mockumentary. How could you change it so that the information is still communicated but so that it looks like a mockumentary. This about the narrator and the use of direct speech to camera/interview structure.